Eight Sentences: Zeelia (2)

Warm green light washed past her. Pungent moss and decaying wood scented the air ahead. An opening. A way out. But was it the one she was looking for? There wasn't time to be choosy. She could hear the scalehounds' talons clicking on the stones behind her. She jumped.

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The Weekend Writing Warriors site sponsors a round of 8-sentence excerpts every weekend. Zeelia (1) was my first 8-sentence except and has become a regular weekly feature here at my blog. There is a new Linky-list at Weekend Writing Warriors for everyone participating in the blog-hop each weekend. Be sure to check out some of the other writers!


  1. I feel the urgency of her situation through the terse sentences - really an excellent snippet and I want to know more.

  2. You know you are in trouble when you hear the scalehounds' talons clicking on the stones behind you. I feel her sense of urgency. Well done.


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